PERFECT DARK / Discussion

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Almarduk 22 Oct 2020 02:16

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FEAR ME

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Now in darkness world stops turning
As you hear the bodies burning
No more war pigs have the power
And as god has struck the hour
They have judgment
God is calling

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Huge thanks to TheGreatTarbolin69, GibbyFuckingDies does not match any existing user name, TTPY, Prototype_Toaster, 8ismo, Vizlox, and H F Dummie for their feedback

Hugely huge thanks to Fortunae for basically telling me how to fix the article's biggest issues.

Le sorces for le imahjes;

• https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Telefontornet#/media/File:Telefontornet_1890.jpg
• https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Chernobyl_disaster#/media/File:IAEA_02790024_(5612544127).jpg
• https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Chernobyl_disaster#/media/File:IAEA_02790050_(5612554065).jpg
• https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:CERN-Rama-26.jpg
• https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Unidentified_locations_in_Czechoslovakia#/media/File:(Srpen68)Trosky_znicenych_vozidel.jpg
• https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Unidentified_machines#/media/File:COLLECTIE_TROPENMUSEUM_Machinehal_suikerfabriek_TMnr_60008527.jpg

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The goddamn crit thread (fuck you dummie i put it here before you could ask me to);

• http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-13787521/rpc-013-perfect-dark

Last edited on 22 Oct 2020 02:29 by Almarduk Show more

moist bread 26 Oct 2020 20:43

calling your contest entry "perfect"? SMH

Almarduk 26 Oct 2020 20:57

cry more worst of the filth dimension

TheGreatTarbolin69 23 Oct 2020 02:20

El Sitio Negro

(account deleted) 23 Oct 2020 15:37

another Win for omegna ionta

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~Baubi

Prototype_Toaster 26 Oct 2020 12:56

My opinions from crit still apply although I do like the better ending you gave this since then. Neutralvote

TheSkilledFox 27 Oct 2020 02:55

neutral vote

Von Pincier 28 Oct 2020 20:41

Ooooh, spooky. I think this is a little too long, but it conveys an excellent sense of foreboding. I love the implication that Blacksite knows they've erased their own past before, and that discovery forgotten bits of their own history is just part of the job.