Below is some more duct tape, and so on
Unnecessary sentence
Viewing of RPC-XXX is to be approved by Level 5 command.
This must have some serious implications on the authority if this painting is restricted to only Level 5 approval
Persons infected with insomnia and paranoia are to be treated
immediately.
Remove the line break and change the sentence to say "Individuals affected by RPC-X are to be treated immediately
They're body freezes for an hour
Their body freezes
treated and drugged
Drugged with what? Amnestics? Specify that
RPC-XXX will torture the person in their dreams
Say that they will have dreams where RPC-X-1 tortures them
Aside from the lackluster clinical tone, this is just extremely boring. The idea you present is a generic item that causes you to go insane before committing suicide. There is no story attached to it either which is fine, but if you are going to give it an overused idea then attach an interesting story with it. And honestly? The bleeding eyes remind me of a bad video game creepypasta from 2012.
Overall just a very forgettable article and concept, 1/5