This whole article felt more like reading a fanfiction than an RPC document. There are also many things that irked me, such as seeing "transgient" throughout without elaboration on its meaning, interview logs that end abruptly and where the characters talk in a way that makes me cringe, and some drawing hidden at the end for some reason? There is also no hint as to where these beings even come from in the first place? Had to keep forcing myself to read through all of this.
Its also strange that the first thing that is mentioned about the anatomy of the anomaly is about their reproductive systems such as
transigent researchers have described a species of androgynous humanoids, showing no discernible genitalia or mammary glands,
and the first collapsible in the description. I don't think the first thing we need to know about this fetish potentially very dangerous threat to normalcy is how it fucks. Honestly I don't know what I could say to make this RPC better.
I'll give it one thing, its impressive that it was all done with just one hand. 1 star.