RPC-316 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-316.

GrammerPoliseCheif 21 Jul 2020 15:55

Crit: http://www.rpc-wiki.net/forum/t-13557923/rpc:the-grand-director-of-global-directors-and-sole-true-fou#post-4721802

I'm grateful to Mr. Pines for his CSS code, and for having received detailed reviews so quickly from DrXOUBLE D, TTPY and Almarduk.

(account deleted) 21 Jul 2020 16:51

This didn’t have to be as long as it was. This could’ve been a single RPC with another Document in a collapsible, and it would’ve been more well rounded and not become slow near the end. This is needlessly long for the sake of being needlessly long. The GD dialogue was terrible in the first three notes. That is something I really can’t forgive, but the potential for this idea is astounding. And while your clinical tone is excellent, this entire thing just needs more refinement. Ditch the length, work on your GD dialogue, and this could be something great, but right now it’s just too long and just has too many flaws to be of any value. +2

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~Baubi

Commander Vil Kleist 21 Jul 2020 23:39

Echoing Gibby's word about the GD's character I agree with it, but since the GD may be ultra-pissed off or emotional, I guess it's ok.

Also I forgot which off-set link where the RPC-? is located (probably you forgot to change it into the mainlist number).

+5 still, cuz it's a good read-ride from start to finish.

Offtopic: GD dossier when?

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TTPY 22 Jul 2020 05:07

That was scrapped
http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/global-director-dossier
This is the best you'll get

Almarduk 06 Apr 2021 16:52

Sources for the files I've localized:

• 316-1
• 316-2

Bro dude 25 Mar 2022 16:41

Omg he actually finished it. Finally. +5. Best article on the site in my founder approved opinion. May he rest in peace.

Gearhart 13 Oct 2022 23:51

Just how powerful is Project Blue Book?!

Gearhart 15 Oct 2022 19:39

No, seriously, how did they go from being unable to successfully hunt down an injured Kitsune to being able to quickly wipe out an entire army of Yokai, many of which were significantly more powerful than the one they struggled with? And why would an agency primarily dealing in extraterrestrial threats have such extensive ground activity in Japan to begin with?

Actually, the entire neutralization document is very anticlimactic. This thing brainwashed almost every Authority agent in Japan, released an army's worth of dangerous Yokai, and led them through several cities towards a major tourist attraction. I repeat; an army sized mob of anomalous entities travelled through multiple, populated cities while most Authority forces were out of action. This makes Failsafe look like a minor incident. Yet not only are they so easily defeated, but we're meant to believe that despite how massive a spectacle this was, there wasn't any trouble keeping a lid on it?

It would have been better if you ended it at the Gamma Purple document. Leave us in suspense as to who ultimately triumphs.