RPC-370 / Discussion

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(account deleted) 01 Jul 2020 19:09

http://www.rpc-wiki.net/forum/t-13462778/rpc-186-the-dark-lord-cair-aisling

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and uh, yah

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~Baubi

Almarduk 01 Jul 2020 19:52

Strauss tells it a fantasized story about the 2019 Site-014 Disaster, making sure to include some fantastical elements on-par with Randolph Gowering's whimsical writings, as to make it believable. RPC-370 believes it.

to be honest, i'd loved much more to read this if it wasn't just told that it happened, but properly narrated

Denick: "Let's not dwell on it. What about you, RPC-1— ahem, Malibos?"

it's considerably harder to pronounce and remember "RPC-370" than it is "malibos". it doesn't make much sense that he'd get confused here.

I'm terrible sorry

terribly

RPC-370 produces a detailed sketch of Randolph Gowering.

this isn't exactly a problem, but it worries me that the article might lose some of its shine a few years down the line when most people forget about this event and stumble upon this rpc

Locke: "Hm. And, what about the 'crowned one' you saw?"

RPC-370: Pauses. "I don't know. Faither, maybe. A vision of the… sun. Heh. Damned thing."

Locke: "Does it tell you anything."

RPC-370: "Nay. Just stand there. It's sun that controls. There be suns in it's eyes. Suns that kill, suns that rape. Empty things."

i don't know exactly how this works but fucking based anyways

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love it! i think it could've been better around certain points, but it's good as-is. the last interview is the very best segment, elevating this article to +4 tier

Big Mark 01 Jul 2020 21:15

Based Manus, good article, +4.

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Marco Marchi B. Mark

moist bread 02 Jul 2020 04:24

Manus: The Hands of Fate

TheGreatTarbolin69 02 Jul 2020 10:57

I can't believe Baph would kill his own father and brother!!!!

Abbefalkon 03 Nov 2024 19:40

Very good, very cool, very evil, very human despite being a deer.

The dialogue is flavorful. This is an example of unrealistic, but good dialogue. Some points it feels cheesy, but overall does a good job presenting a mix of character and plot.

I would love to see how exactly the empty monarch got to Randolph, but that is definitely best saved for a a different article.

4/5