1/5 overall. Poetry does not an anomaly make.
2/5 premise. Too many proper nouns ripped straight from existing religious lore.
1/5 delivery. All the technical data given in the description… why? The draw is the addendum, which is a tale.
5/5 grammar. Well done.
Containment articles are containment articles. The draw is the format, and the spooky thing that it describes. Like a haiku, one can write about many subjects, but if the format is broken it is no longer a haiku, regardless of the quality of the writing. Here is a wonderful piece of literature that simply deviates too far from the essence of a containment document to be considered one.