DrXouble D’s (The Planet) / Discussion

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DrXOUBLE D 24 May 2020 08:28

Hazards: Extra-Terrestrial, Geological, and Animated

Almarduk 27 May 2020 00:51

Give it a check read for broken code and remaining XXXs.

Otherwise, I think this is decent, if a bit confusing and not quite explored.

Redtide 29 May 2020 11:39

"**Addendum 052.D:"
is broken, viewable as seen here. please fix

"RPC-052-♥-03 says how the call is telling him to enter the basin."
the name of this one is Amanda but you used "him"

"Title: The Fall of Last Truth"
the fall of THE last truth? sounds more grammatically correct

"ponders about the nature of the beginning of RPC-XXX."
left an "X" in there, fix it

"by a fight between Angela Merkel and Abrahamic God"
you mean "and the Abrahamic god". the "the" is needed here. Also Angela Merkel? that just kinda feels weird to put a recent political figure in there. Now if it was the Queen, i'd have to give it a bit more credit

other than that, really good job man.