THE SKY IS ALIVE (TRHContest Excer ImNotEric) / Discussion

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3 RANDOM HAZARDS (TRH) ENTRY -THE SKY IS ALIVE- ImNotEric(BigGreenMeanMemeMachine) - Excer(AOS1981)

ImNotEric 20 May 2020 04:44

This is an entry made between me (ImNotEric) and a friend (Excer). The mandatory tags were Explosive, Immeasurable, and Teleportation. We did not choose a random image. It is inspired by the pseudo-scientific speculatory biology theory "The sky is alive". Which in itself claims that UFOs are not vehicles, but giant living creatures. plz crit and upvote

Almarduk 20 May 2020 20:38

RPC-052-Ω will then release a currently unknown mist

One thing that bothers me is this use of "unknown." Perhaps "unidentified type of mist" would work better here.

will begin utilizing their appendages

Same here. Wouldn't "employing" or "using" fit better?

this creature will undergo a metamorphosis

I think the "a" is unnecessary.

Stage 4: AAt this stage,

typo

The occurrence of a large Jellyfish-like creature

Maybe "similar to specimens of the Medusozoa subphylum."

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While the idea is interesting and well executed, I don't quite get what's going on in the last log, maybe because I missed the stinger. It feels as if, instead of exploring RPC-052 itself, the article focuses on its effect on the public.

This would've probably worked if I had priorly known of the theory that inspired you, but since I didn't, it failed to resonate with me. I feel this could've been better if there was a closer focus on public speculation, and perhaps constrasting it with the Authority's knowledge.

That said, it's solidly written, but could use some improving.

TTPY 24 May 2020 00:52

Code for Orange-rating: #F36400
Code for Department of Biology:

[[span class="tooltip"]][[image http://rpcauthority.wdfiles.com/local--files/the-office-of-analysis-and-science/Biology2.png style="margin: -10px 0px; width: 60px; filter: invert(1); opacity: 0.8"] class="tooltip"]] [[span class="tooltiptext"]]Department of
Biology[[/span]][[/span]]

this fog makes difficult RPC-052 observation

this fog makes observation of RPC-052 difficult

Cross-referencing footage indicates that

footages

From this finding

From this finding,

The drone recording is however

The drone recording is, however,

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Final Thoughts: Don't really have one, it's the living ufo concept, only fear is that it may prevent others from writing Flying Sourcers(?), nah nevermind that.

Where is The Anomaly?

(account deleted) 25 May 2020 22:57

As of right now, I dont really see a hell of a lot of anomalous activity here. These creatures just show up to breed, and not knowing where they come from isn't enough for me. They really need to DO something a lot stranger upon arrival. Otherwise, theyre not an anomaly, theyre just a new species.

Re: Where is The Anomaly?

(account deleted) 25 May 2020 23:54

Downvoting for the same reasons.

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"I'm too drunk to taste this chicken."

Re: Where is The Anomaly?

Laclale 25 May 2020 23:58

Umm… me too.

Re: Where is The Anomaly?

Commander Vil Kleist 28 May 2020 10:21

Unknown species or ET is an anomaly.

We don't know their biology and it's also a threat to normalcy.

Anomaly = The unknown

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O/

Yoknapatawpha 26 May 2020 10:23

I actually disagree with the sentiments above. I greatly appreciate the amount of time and care it took to make them *appear* non-anomalous.

Because it takes great strides to not only consider how the public would react and how the Authority would manage a psyops/disinformation campaign, its grounded in real-world events.

Part of the fun of the article is how its diagetic elements are plausible, with the only reason it receives its anomalous designation seemingly being due to the fact that… we as a society are clearly not advanced enough in our xenobiological studies.

Redtide 30 May 2020 23:40

"which will attempt contact"
this feels off, maybe "attempt TO contact"

Overall a really nice look into the coverups the Authority does.