RPC-886 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-886.

GrammerPoliseCheif 06 May 2020 05:00

Re-upped to remove bot votes and deleted account votes.

Did not include recent 2 comments that asked where the ratings bar went (was removed pending the article's re-upload; just didn't like being reminded of those bot votes.)

Original crit

JimmyBoyHaha 06 May 2020 05:34

edit: It's been fixed

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GrammerPoliseCheif 06 May 2020 06:26

AAAAAAAAAAAA fixed thanks

JoMike 06 May 2020 13:32

Nice to see this come back, this is shaping up to be a classic.

H F Dummie 21 May 2020 16:48

This is strangely formatted and the grammar can feel lacking at time. The narrative is real good, however. Find me on Discord for what I mean by "strangely formatted".

siiva 29 May 2020 18:12

My criticism was the same but looks like you covered it.

google_chrome 26 May 2020 21:48

that utility subclass is the big autism, otherwise it is the same as I first read,

mew xd 29 May 2020 22:29

floax wee hee

Dew_Evil0964 20 Jun 2020 00:25

I love this RPC, I wonder what would happen if RPC-886 vs SCP-953 met?

Nannar_Ur 23 Mar 2021 04:19

It would be interesting, because they both have opposite personalities

elitegamer010 29 Aug 2020 04:58

This is literally just "Shintoism: The RPC".

2 stars

GrammerPoliseCheif 15 Apr 2021 05:50

Pretty rich coming from the guy whose long-gone article was "Deus Vult: The RPC".

Appreciate that you no longer auto-vote everything as 1-star, regardless.

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Abbefalkon 06 Jul 2023 13:00

Right, there are occasional hiccups in clinical tone, both in the description and in the logs. These hiccups contributed to a rather cheesy tone, and long with all the otaku references, I would be lying if I said that I didn't visually cringe at times.

However, I did enjoy the story as a whole. but that's more attributed to the characters than to the mythology. I'd give it a 3.7, so I'll round it up to 4.