Hazards:
I'm pretty sure this anomaly falls under the sentient
Containment Protocols:
OL-Site-067 has been established in the waters surrounding RPC-282.
On an island? Floating? Kinda like a oil extracting station? Could be more specific here
Description:
in which case RPC-282 will flee rapidly before eventually returning to its original position.
How does a motherfuck half the size of a skyscraper move at any speed closely related to "fast"? And where does he go when he flees? That sounds like an important bit of information.
Addendums:
RPC-282 was first located in the East China Sea 82.3 kilometers off the coast of Shanghai
Going anywhere near China is a really bad idea, and one that wouldn't make the Chinese goverment nor the PCAAo very happy, sounds like the start of a conflict of interets.
several vessels belonging the Cetace's Kin were noted around RPC-282's position
Belonging to* i recomend running all drafts and articles in a grammar checker before posting as it saves times from having to find (or hope someone else finds) mistakes and fixing them.
Interview:
Individual is noted to be moving there hand throughout the inside of a blue cloak they were wearing
Their hand* again, make sure to double, tripel, quadruple check fro grammar errors before posting.
The interview fell, odd? Kinda rushed and unnatural, the ending was also a pretty heavy Deus Ex Machina.
Overall thoughts:
I like the idea, the execution could be better an the grammar could a hell lot better, there are also some very heavy reperating of words throughout the article and it could use some spacing.
3/5 its ok, may change the rating if some of the present issues are fixed