Overall I enjoy the main idea of this entry but I feel that it is somewhat cramped in a lot of spots. The judas entry in the description feels cluttered and not very clinical and would probably be best with its own log that gets mentioned in the description instead. It's more of what that RPC believes and says about itself and not just a description of it.
The Discovery log is very cramped, as just one wall of text and would best be shown as a transcript of the events and not just a description of the events. It could still be a description of the events but would need the comments of the MST removed.
Lastly, the Interview is again a wall of text with every paragraph and it's hard to want to follow along. Shortening sections of it and spreading it out in other interviews to space it out could help. It also seems somewhat too informal but that may have been what you were going for. Maybe break everything up a bit more and have him refer to the RPC as 394 instead.
I hope you can make sense of what I'm saying here as I think this is a good RPC, it just needs a few touch-ups. Also, I haven't written many critiques before so this may be a bit rough to understand.