RPC-742 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-742.

Nvayeth 05 Apr 2020 04:49

I like this, though I think it's a little… muted? Puns aside, 4 stars for creativity and construction. It's lacking a real "hook" for me though, emotional or otherwise. But I don't think that's necessarily a bad thing.

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Redtide 05 Apr 2020 05:01

I understand, only wanted this to be a small minor article, a one off, nothing more.

JoMike 05 Apr 2020 14:56

needs tags, but pretty good nonetheless.

Almarduk 11 Dec 2020 03:20

I feel like this doesn't really explore its concept. It could be better if it was perhaps more detail (but not necessarily longer), with something that readers could piece together rather than being basically told it.

TomatointheMirror 11 Jun 2022 00:40

It's a decent anomaly. Simple, not too grand, but a nice curiosity. Unfortunately, the addenda raise a lot of questions that the article isn't willing to answer. The final researcher's note especially feels like the author wink wink nudge nudge-ing the reader and directly telling them what the mystery is supposed to be.
Could've been a nice bite-sized work, but doesn't quite click.

High Gamma 13 Oct 2022 23:13

Yeah it's pretty good through and through. The formatting could use some retouching, and I wish I was a musician because I did not understand a single technicality of the experiment logs. That is to say, you managed to communicate what each song felt and represented, while also expanding a little on what an Academy anomaly feels like

Got me all hooked up on your GOI as well, but the ending note feels…contrived. With a rewrite into a more clinical observation, this could be fixed.

4 stars, because I'm biased against GOI's

Missing tag?

redgi110 19 May 2023 07:48

I think there should be an Academy tag?