Since there’s separate rating modules on every page, I’m rating this separately to the puzzle. I think the puzzle was decent and I’ll give 4 stars to the first page for that.
I don’t see the point of this article. There were no recurring characters. There was no plot that spanned the whole article. It was a bunch of sections that didn’t have much of a connection to each other. I can’t say any one section was bad. The dialog at the end was decent which is something to be proud of when interrogation logs tend to be so terrible so easily.
The grammar wasn’t abysmal like some other long articles I’ve read so I can’t say it was a slog to read through either. It’s just that the way this article was structured, it gave the impression of building up to something, but the ending section wasn’t any better than the previous ones, and it didn’t tie everything together. It still felt like an ending, but it wasn’t very satisfying.