Tale: KK Document Lore With RPC-XXX

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A piece of cut content from the main draft.

Tale: KK Document Lore With RPC-XXX

Yoknapatawpha 25 Mar 2020 23:35

http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/textalignment

Re: Tale: KK Document Lore With RPC-XXX

Prototype_Toaster 30 Mar 2020 01:00

And sometimes, accidents happen. The the 1993 incident was a freak act of God.

Messed up link

"operand condition"

Fix that to "operant conditioning"

This was a really nice tale. The ending of this was soul crushing however I would remove the line "There is no divine spirit. We are all Meat in the end." it feels a little too edgy and cheesy. I also enjoy the line "I do not need a bunch of ["abductors" or "rapists"] to damage a Doll before even entering our custody. " which is beyond messed up when you realize that this is a KK document. Very good tale. 5/5

Re: Tale: KK Document Lore With RPC-XXX

Alex Mercer Fan Club 30 Mar 2020 06:43

A pretty good read of KK, it is something weird as people see to overlook KK or round up hate it.

what i recommend is checking for some grammar errors and wording, you can always improve on how people talk.

5/5 article, very good