RPC-239 / Discussion

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Capitano Nox 16 Mar 2020 22:11

Co-authored with Xander Ether.

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The Son of Man 02 Mar 2021 21:37

Good article overall. "The Mother" is one of my favorite non-GOI entities to follow as of now.

The only complaint I have is how poorly the "RPC-239 Containment breach report" is currently formated.

Capitano Nox 02 Mar 2021 22:02

Thanks a lot! Unfortunately I have no idea how to make that look less messy since my ideas just seem to not work since they cut too much from the original thing.

(account deleted) 10 Sep 2021 17:43

Just did a fat rewrite. Didn't really touch the interview logs, though, but they could still use some work.

Capitano Nox 10 Sep 2021 17:44

Thanks to BetterMyButter does not match any existing user name for the rewrite.

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onefullydone 04 Oct 2023 23:52

Now I know that Mother is a PoI and not a GoI. She does feel corny though, seems like nothing more than a pretentious scary bitch who likes to toy with the Authority, but maybe there's more lore I don't know. Anyways, what I liked most about this one is how the RPC uses its intellectual ability to kill others instead of being an obvious outward threat. This alone makes it more spooky than I expected. A couple of problems I have unfortunately.

It was aided by 18 personnel,

How was it able to… get 18 personnel to touch it? There is only one interview before this incident log without any mention of previous ones. Did someone throw a party in its containment chamber?

near the vault of incident reports in the USA.

This line feels awkward, maybe make it more specific where?

Well, its a decent monster RPC. 4 stars. By the way, is Lucas Walker Jr. inspired by any particular serial killer since its fictional and not an actual person in real life?

Capitano Nox 09 Oct 2023 21:26

I mostly based him off Chucky from Child's Play.