AAAAAAAAAAAAAA HOLY HELL Ok Hello everyone! I am back with a new draft Finally! after "working" very hard in school and saving up precious time in between classes (and also maybe goofing off over winter break) I come back to you with a new draft, It is Labelled "The Godfisher" and while i think the concept is one of my better ones, I do feel I need major help with a better execution (even if you tell me to not continue with it, I will understand). also, there's a secret aspect to the article that is a crucial story element, click below to find it out:
http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/jomike
All Critique is appreciated, and I'll try not to have any more hiatuses.