And He Must Always Hurt / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page And He Must Always Hurt.

Ascriber 16 Feb 2020 00:28

Link to draft thread. Thanks to moist bread and ieatcrepes for crit.

The password poem section at the top at bottom, I didn't write that. Full credit to Vladimir Nabokov's Pale Fire.

The start to a series of RCPA tales. Hopefully portraying a more nuanced, self-reflective RCPA from their own perspective: in articles they usually monologue dramatically at the baseline Authority, and with moist bread's tales are superb they're a very gritty, slummy view of this alternate world.

I want to explore the more relatable, decent side. Humanity manages to shine through the cracks even in a world designed to be over-the-top.

There's a wealth of worldbuilding on the lore discord that needs to make it onto the site. This is a start.

0ktober 18 May 2020 21:59

This good-willed perspective on the inner RCPA is so good. It adds such a rich layer of context to things.

H F Dummie 19 May 2020 17:12

This article has a raider ratio of 47%. I suggest reuploading.

Abbefalkon 09 Oct 2023 18:41

Pretty nice ideological/power comments. Written well, dialogue is smooth, if not too smooth at times. Only problem is that that is all it is. There isn't really a story, the entire thing is mostly a tell over show. For what it aims to be however, it works. 4/5