RPC-J "You're Fired"

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RPC-J "You're Fired"

0ktober 30 Jan 2020 00:56

http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/youre-fired

Re: RPC-J "You're Fired"

JimmyJohnJohnson 30 Jan 2020 01:15

Audio recording devices should be placed underneath the floor and within walls such that RPC-XXX-J could not be aware of the devices.
Audio recording devices is to be hidden underneath the floor and within walls.

“Personnel should not be in a position”
Personnel cannot be in a position

That’s it. Oh ya and not cringe

Re: RPC-J "You're Fired"

ieatcrepes 31 Jan 2020 02:37

This is very well polished. It is funny enough to be enjoyed and technical enough to be appreciated. I don't really have any fixes or suggestions and think this is ready as is. I think I'd rather see RPC-XXX-J find its way into the White House somehow after having a confrontation with some military leader or employee of the Executive Branch, and have it end that way instead of the GD council. The ending with the wicked witch-esque melting fell a bit flat for me, but this is me just trying to come up with something to help.

Re: RPC-J "You're Fired"

0ktober 31 Jan 2020 03:02

Shit you’re right. RPC-XXX-J meeting the actual Donald Trump as president of the united states could be a much better ending

Re: RPC-J "You're Fired"

Alex Mercer Fan Club 03 Feb 2020 01:16

I'm not like a really good individual to give crit. but this article is very fun on it´s own. I though at the beginning that i was going to be like an "orange man bad" bit but it makes sense and the ending is over the top
good stuff viz

funny, cummed

10/10