RPC-980 / Discussion

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This is beyond your experience

Prototype_Toaster 10 Nov 2019 17:27

Second article, something I fully enjoyed writing. I've been wanting to do a mindscrew for who knows how long and now that I can actually write the way I want, I was able to create this सूअर

GibbyFuckingDies does not match any existing user name helped write half of this, and I think our styles mesh really well together here. Also thanks to KaiserXI and JimmyBoyHaha for criticism.

Recommended listening for this article
HariHara The First Movement - Digital Devil Saga OST
The Great Destroyer (modwheelmod Remix) - Nine Inch Nails

Last edited on 10 Nov 2019 17:46 by Prototype_Toaster Show more

(account deleted) 10 Nov 2019 17:45

ok

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~Baubi

Prototype_Toaster 10 Nov 2019 17:48

No longer available Baubius

5 Outta 5

(account deleted) 19 Dec 2019 23:17

Its a good exploration of Hinduism summed up in a RPC article. While also maintaining a good story behind it.

Almarduk 30 Jul 2020 02:30

Unsatisfying ending. The rest of the article is great. +4

indira in critic corner

(account deleted) 22 Sep 2020 15:51

omrga uota wins again…

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~Baubi

3/5 [ >mfw the kali yuga wins again :((( ]

ImNotEric 23 Sep 2020 22:51

3/5. Cool original concept with great background. However, I feel like the ending was undeserving and out-of-nowhere. There is simply not enough build-up and hints that justify the ending IMO. In many ways, it is unsatisfying bc like I said there is not enough build-up.

Also, I feel like this particular generic ending does not go well with this original idea. but that is more of a nitpick.

In conclusion, I think you should expand on this article. Don't be afraid of writing more. I am not asking you to write another article, just write 2 or 3 more paragraphs to "justify" the ending; bc everything else here is epic.

3/5

Ravwen 31 Jan 2021 03:17

Interesting concept and a very interesting setup….
However I feel like the idea is unfinished and still needs a bit of work. The ending feels like something that was made up on the fly - It's pretty generic and unsatisfying, even though the rest of the article is amazingly written!

Rated 3/5. Amazing introduction and description, but falls short in the ending.