Death Is Late To The Party: Jimmy and Dummie's Autumn Entry / Discussion

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moist bread 26 Oct 2019 00:29

damn dude give the rest of the submissions a chance next time

Von Pincier 26 Oct 2019 12:53

This is great stuff, but it needs another round of proofreading I think. Lots of minor issues.

H F Dummie 26 Oct 2019 15:26

Fuck. What's wrong specifically?

Edit: Nvm, holy shit there were a lot

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Togetic 27 Oct 2019 03:03

I really, really like this one (and not just because it extensively uses one of my articles).

I do think

RPC-131 is the designation given to 925 persons recovered within the vicinity of Lublin, Poland. Despite no fewer than 5 years of interment as well as sustaining various levels of wounds and injuries such as gunshot wounds, shrapnel wounds and second-degree burns, all RPC-131 instances have not expired.

should probably be altered, though? The premise of the first iteration is that all insances are dead, but this outright says they're alive

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Redtide 30 Oct 2019 06:53

I remember there being a few issues with wording or clinical tone when i first read this a few days ago, just checking up to see if their fixed. Apart from that, SOLID article. This contest is full of great articles.