Since my philosophy is that readers should be able to read any RPC without needing to read additional documents, I won't focus on the RPC-955 & 956 cross-links. The anomaly concept featured here is very interesting, but the rest of the article I felt did not sufficiently expand upon it. We're not really shown how the mining technology is "evolving" or how it reflects a religious society. The documents that are included don't really say anything we don't already know from the description.
For example, no new information about the Remnants timeline is explained, other than there was some vague political conflict before the Remnant event happened. I think there just simply needs to be more content added to this article, because right now it's essentially just a description of an anomaly. To fix this, I would suggest adding maybe some exploration logs, or communication logs with the AI on the machines, or even just a list of different mining machines and what their operations are.
If an individual is not operating an industrial vehicle, but who have consumed large amounts of tonally dark science fiction media, enters RPC-954-1 they will access RPC-955.
"If an individual who has consumed large amounts of tonally dark science fiction media, but is not operating an industrial vehicle, enters RPC-954-1, they will access RPC-955."
Please see addendum.1 for documents recovered from RPC-954.
I would suggest footing this.
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effecting
"affecting"
Though, I
No comma needed.
powers at be
"powers that be"
