RPC-260 / Discussion

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Credits and stuff

AnomalousDucky 09 Oct 2019 19:09

Big thanks to Enkrum for critting this article.

This is my first RPC that I decided to post. I don't know if I should've waited longer or done it now, but here it is.

Anyways, the image was found on Wikimedia Commons:

Link

EDIT: The entire site's theme is glitching at the time if writing. It's not just this page.

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DrXOUBLE D 10 Oct 2019 15:06

Isn’t Damien Co just a copy of Amazing Co!

AnomalousDucky 10 Oct 2019 16:42

I started this draft as an SCP one, but decided to move it over to the RPC site instead.

I did not know about Amazing! Co at this time, but I was planning to change the references to Damien Co to GEAR after I had figured this out. Enkrum, or CEO of Jojo on the Discord said it seemed like a good GoI, and that I didn't have to replace the words though, so I just rolled with it. I will change it if I am required to do so.

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Von Pincier 11 Oct 2019 01:38

This format is incredibly difficult to read, at least on my screen. Monospace text is really hard on the eyes for longer formats.

I stand by my previous assertion that Damien Co is nothing new and that this would fit better with one of the preexisting GoIs. No vote until I can read this without going blind.

AnomalousDucky 11 Oct 2019 01:46

I updated the font, should be better now.

I will probably change the mentions of Damien Co to GEAR, and change up the story. I'll have to do that later on, though.

Croal 12 Oct 2019 16:55

For at least me particularly, white on black is still very difficult to read. A light grey is much easier.

AnomalousDucky 12 Oct 2019 21:25

The color for the body is #c0c0c0, which is a very light gray. I'll consider changing it if I find a better color to use.

EDIT: Changed the color to #b3b3b3. It's only slightly darker, but it works well.

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Croal 12 Oct 2019 17:47

and resembles a shape similar to human intestines.

Without the photo I would be confused with this description. I suggest changing it to something like "twisting tubular formation" maybe

and their vital functions subsequently cease.

Why? Do they absorb something from the anomaly?

Nice first anomaly on RPC. I hope to see more!

AnomalousDucky 12 Oct 2019 21:23

I'm glad you liked it, and I will be looking forward to making more!