RPC-680 / Discussion

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Croal 17 Sep 2019 19:40

CSD-2543 walks through the door and ceases to exist
Instead of "ceases to exist" use something describing that communication is lost. There's no way that they would know that he stopped existing. Same for the rest of the article when the same term is used.

The squad fires on RPC-680-B. All of these shots are fired into Agent Faemore's heart, causing the squad to stop firing upon noticing.
The squad would be better than this. I'm not sure if I misunderstand what is happening here, but if it's friendly fire there would be no way that they all hit his heart.

I like the quotes from -B, especially RENDER UNTO CAESAR!!!

BallYT 18 Sep 2019 00:20

The squad fires into his heart because they tried to fire on -B but -B directed every shot into the heart. They noticed after a few seconds which is when they stopped.

I assume the Authority would be able to tell he stopped existing entirely when he went in and all readings whatsoever indicated he wasn't there, but I will edit this to make it clearer since right now I think the observation staff are confused at first when they shouldn't be since it would be obvious that no communication was working.

Croal 28 Sep 2019 21:38

Yeah make it more clear that they are wearing vitals monitoring equipment, but still I think they would assume that the equipment was either ruined or out of range when they disappear, instead of literally ceasing to exist.

Excer 24 Sep 2019 16:19

Nice RPC, also like the horror to it

Bro dude 25 Feb 2021 15:31

Seeking permission to change:

A shattered RPC-680-A instance will emit lethal gases into the air which cause rapid asphyxiation in any individual who inhales the gas, as well as [DATA EXPUNGED].

to:

Upon shattering, instances emit a gaseous substance that causes rapid asphyxiation, as well as [DATA EXPUNGED], upon inhalation.

Almarduk 25 Feb 2021 17:09

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Bro dude 25 Feb 2021 18:22

K

Almarduk 27 Mar 2021 20:25

Thoroughly enjoyed 680-B. However, the length of this article really plays against it — no matter how many times I've tried to read this, my eyes start glazing over after Exploration C. Even if the tone is delightfully bizarre, the content itself quickly becomes repetitive.

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