pretty good, but there are some things I think should be cleared up:
- How important is the material used for golem creation to the creation of a golem? could wax be used instead of clay, does the entire body need to be made of one substance, can it be hollow, etc.
- If the book can be duplicated, why is it considered a sub-anomaly? Specifically, why is each individual copy considered its own sub-anomaly, especially if one of them is in the hands of the Union, and organization built around the spread and copying of information.
- Since the Jewish Golem seems to draw some inspiration from the Egyptian *shabti*, perhaps it would make more sense if the non-Hebrew 50% of the book was written in Egyptian hieroglyphs, rather than an unknown language that would be useless to anyone trying to read it.
- Since this is based on Jewish folklore, wouldn't the Jewish GOI "Blue Star" be interested in RPC-219?