RPC-261 is to be attached to a life support system to make sure its body does not expired.
Change “expired” to “expire”
The walls of its cell are to have electronic impulses in place to counter 261 "ghost" bodies.
Change “261” to “RPC-261”
Thermal cameras are to be placed in RPC-261 cell to see any movement of 261's physical body and it "ghost" forms, and any signs are to be reported immediately .
Change “RPC-261” to “RPC-261’s”
I would change “see” to “observe for” to make it more clinical.
Change “261’s” to “RPC-261’s”
Change “it” to “its”
Remove the spaces before the period at the end.
I suggest specifying who exactly they are supposed to report to. The site directer? Head Researcher?
If RPC-261 wishes to commutate it must be done through a EEG machine.
Change “a” to “an”
If use of RPC-261 is needed, 261 is permitted to only create as many projections as needed and is only given the most essential information about the mission.
Change “261” to “RPC-261”
RPC-261 is the comatose body of William █████████ a Caucasian male of 34 years of age with the only the physical anomalies is its severely weakened body .
Add a comma after the redaction.
“the only the physical anomalies is its severely weakened body” reads very strangely. I recommend changing it to something like “the only anomalous propety is its severely weakened body”
Remove the space before the period.
RPC-261 body have showed the following symptoms: organ failure, low blood pressure, weakening lungs and inflammation.
Change “RPC-261” to “RPC-261’s”
Change “have showed” to “has shown”
Despite this, RPC-261 brain is still at its optimal state, somehow surviving its body rapid decline.
Change “RPC-261” to “RPC-261’s”
Change “body” to “body’s”
The anomalous properties of RPC-261 is that its can project multiple incorporeal versions of itself at will.
Change “properties” to “property”
Change “its” to “it”
These projections can travel through walls and others surfaces and have been observed to be able to move objects and people.
Change “others” to “other”
It been discovered that while in this state RPC-261 can enter the minds of other sapient begins and manipulate their thoughts and actions through orders.
Change “It been” to “It has been”
Add a comma after “this state”
RPC-261 was recovered form ███████ State Hospital after collapsing while in its workplace form pains,profuse sweating, and coughing up blood.
Add a space before “profuse”
The Authority became involved after doctors was going to take 261 off of life support, only to be attacked by its projections.
Change “261” to “RPC-261”
Agents arrived and after reading the reports and discovering that they all have some relation to 261,attempted to extract it, only for one of them to be controlled by 261 projections.
Change “261,attempted” to “RPC-261. They attempted”
