This article is pretty good, and I wouldn't have even left a review if it weren't for one thing: The incident that sets Whitman off completely lacks weight. There are a multitude of issues. First off, "they accidentally left the door open" is a dumb cop-out. Also, it's not the greatest to portray the Authority as immoral for something that we have collectively decided they don't do. Yes, this is before that precedent was established, but this is what a single canon does to old articles.
I don't think those are the central problem, though. The real issue is that Whitman seems ridiculously dysfunctional as a person. Remember: he quits his job, flees his home, and kills himself because he saw a single test subject die and found out he'd been bugged. The article is rather explicit in telling me that this is not the result of a gradual build-up of discomfort or off-screen events, but that this is actually the thought process he went through. I've never worked for the RPC Authority, but I can't say that would be my first choice in such a scenario.
Besides that, the dialogue is consistently mediocre. Maybe I've sounded incredibly negative in this post, but in truth, the package was adequately enjoyable and interesting as a whole, in a way that isn't too interesting to comment on. It just has a few issues that prevent me from taking it completely seriously. 4/5