Shit, got the chills IRL you damn idiot.
Tone wise and grammar wise it’s great, nothing fancy but it’s easy on my eyes (even at 4 AM).
The anomaly itself, I was rather confused about during the description, it sounded quite… average? Pretty cool, but I wasn’t expecting anything breakthrough. When I got to the addendum I realised what I was looking at. For a moment, I started asking those questions to myself, even; the final question is the one that hits the most to me, and it’s supposed to. I actually thought about it for a moment, what really is a man’s downfall? We don’t know it.
5/5.