RPC-294 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-294.

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JJ_Blocks 10 May 2019 02:24

Credit to "Gearhart" for all photo's in the article.

JimmyBoyHaha 10 May 2019 06:42

You fixed none of the errors in the article, except for the title. My vote still stands.

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blabbo

(account deleted) 10 May 2019 13:18

very boring

H F Dummie 11 May 2019 03:25

This isn't exactly well written and the idea is a bit too generic. Sorry.

pogchamp 11 May 2019 03:52

Your title seems yeeted mate. :omegalul:

Gearhart 19 Jul 2019 13:20

This is definitely an improvement from your previous drafts. I see you've removed the yearly mating event where they come up near the surface to breed. I know that must have been hard for you. It takes a lot to a abandon an element of your idea, but it's something every writer faces at some point in their life.

Almarduk 08 Sep 2021 18:42

Fun little concept, but the addenda after A are a letdown. The article would be better without those experiment logs.

MF_TOMB 09 Jun 2023 01:25

Okay I was really harsh but I still stand by that this is just filler man. Come on. You can do better than this. It's been up for ages so you know if the original author isn't doing anything with it I should sometime I don't know.

Last edited on 09 Jun 2023 03:46 by MF_TOMB Show more