Containment Protocols
chromium walls
How thick are these walls?
Description
Endoxyla leucomochla
Remember to put names like these in italics.
Trapdoor species.
Trapdoor spider is a common name, not a scientific name. You could use this as a footnote and instead put it as "several families from the infraorder Mygalomorphae."
Hide measured at 5 inches deep.
5 inches deep equals 12.7 cm, maybe this unit slipped past.
Those are the things I feel need to be corrected, minor mistakes in a very well written, lore rich article. I love it, it was a very entertaining read with addenda that provide a rich backstory and well structured lore for the GOI involved. Good job.