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extremes of heat and cold
Extreme temperatures would be better used here.
███ Site-015 and Site-002 exploratory team staff
What is the number behind these blackboxes? The number of team personnel recovered? It doesn't read like that. It seems like a redaction you forgot to take out.
██ pregnant female employees.
This doesn't really come off as anything that adds to the background, and I don't see any good reason to have the number behind a blackbox anyway.
While the rest of the interview log is well written and provides decent backstory for this anomaly, it reads very memey and "in your face" for my taste. The concept of a genie exposed to Nietszche is fine, but, the execution doesn't quite cut it for me.
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