RPC-029 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-029.

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0ktober 18 Mar 2019 18:32

crit here (I changed the RPC number)

Credit:

Thanks to JerryJohn and MrJerusalem for critique.

4chan CSS created by MrPines

This was a collaboration between me and several anonymous 4chan users.

Thread here

I was the OP, township called me a faggot and the rest were anons.

The drawing of RPC-029 was created by myself.

The audio file was also created by myself.

Last edited on 18 Mar 2019 18:33 by 0ktober Show more

elitegamer010 19 Mar 2019 16:36

Author of the original 029 here. I quite like this article, despite the fact that you stole my number as soon as it got deleted.

When I read the /x/ part I thought it was stupid and that it doesn't look like a real thread at all….. and of course I was pleasantly surprised when I saw that it was actually a real fucking thread. A small nitpick I have to give about it is that /x/ is a blue board, it uses the Yotsuba B theme by default. Your 4Chan section uses the Yotsuba theme, which is default only on NSFW boards.

There is a paragraph that appears to be unfinished.

" Response: MST Alpha-3 reported to the location and applied amnestics to all surviving subjects as well as"

as well as WHAT?

Finally, this should be an Info-Hazard. Talking about it triggers it's effects.

Last edited on 19 Mar 2019 16:40 by elitegamer010 Show more

0ktober 19 Mar 2019 17:04

Thanks for the crit

Also, I didn’t steal anything. Sorry buddy ;)

JimmyBoyHaha 02 Apr 2019 05:52

Vizlox didn't "steal" anythin' bud

Posting an article in a deleted article's spot is not stealing, buddy

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(account deleted) 22 Mar 2019 01:46

Unique take on the usual "creepy forest monster" trope. It feels good enough to be some kind of legit urban myth, if it wasn't one already. I've never heard of it so it's new to me.
One the main points I look for when reading an article is whether the concept could exist on its own outside of RPC lore - this could definitely stand alone. I'm easy to impress though, hah.
+5 Amigo.

0ktober 22 Mar 2019 02:59

I’m glad you liked it. It isn’t a real urban legend, came up with it myself.

DarkGreenEspeon 27 Mar 2019 19:24

I think the premise you have is great. If only the execution was a bit better. The article is pretty well written for the most part, I just think the last log needs editing. The way it is, it's way too on the nose. It would improve the quality of the article greatly if the anomaly was just slightly more cryptic. The way it is now, it's just "hey i had a thing thrown on me from a Nazi bomber, it sucked bro".

Other than that, the only issues with this article are a couple of spelling mistakes and the images in the 4chan section, where I believe you tried to make the image URLs work as they do in 4chan but messed up. This is a very good article, magnificent work.

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Jokezm 17 May 2019 01:53

I'm not sure if it's intentional, but you can probably redact the RPC-029 links on the 4chan image. This article is also a bit of an Info-Hazard. There should be some sort of warning for all personnels reading this to not read it out loud on the woods or something.

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pogchamp 01 Jun 2019 19:00

Epic article m8. 5 medals without question. :gg:

Dabbing on them with the colors!

JimmyJohnJohnson 15 Aug 2019 16:45

It’s good but I think at least some kind of suppression of info should be in the containment protocols

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JasonMakesManhattens 08 Mar 2021 00:55

This is just strangely blasé about taking itself seriously and if it doesn’t care, why should a reader?

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8ismo 18 Oct 2023 14:19

I was a bit sceptical when it came to the first half of the article, as it kind of felt like a thrown together urban cryptid with not much meat to it. Although, the addendi (except the Amazing! Co. one which feels horribly out of place and forced) make up for it and build up from the premise. It flows from the military theme and while opens one question it satisfies another - making it both fun to read and ponder about it after doing so.