I'll say up front that I'm not familiar with these characters. Perhaps if I was, I'd enjoy this tale a bit more than I have. I doubt it, though.
I don't like the writing in this tale much at all. Most sentences are weirdly written and awkwardly phrased. I had to convert them to sentences with proper structures in my head just to understand what I was reading.
I want to clarify that I like the story you're trying to tell. Somewhere in this tale is a fun, interesting short story about an anomaly living with a researcher. Due to the abundance of all these sentences that don't work, though, that short story is hidden very deep down.
I hope you can improve your writing in the future and go on to write better and better tales.