RPC-795 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-795.

(account deleted) 09 Mar 2019 01:07

Researcher Franklin as angled the camera to face directly downwards of RPC-795's cave system.

I think you mean:

Researcher Franklin has angled the camera to face directly downwards of RPC-795's cave system.

Besides that error, I like it, so five star for me. Everything about the article is nice. >:]

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yoitsgecko 10 Mar 2019 15:38

Thanks man, I fixed it.

google_chrome 10 Mar 2019 04:27

A fairly good RPC, with an above average story. Well done +4

Croal 11 Mar 2019 18:27

There are some tense grammar issues regarding the exploration log, specifically the researchers. You used future tense when the exploration has already happened.

DarkGreenEspeon 25 Mar 2019 20:51

While the execution for this one is good (other than the tense issues someone else mentioned), I'm not so sure about the concept. It feels to me like there are a couple too many ideas here, as if Living Cave and Cave Full of Giant Bees and Giant Flower could be two separate RPCs. Perhaps there's some thematic connection I'm missing, in which case please explain it to me, but for now I just don't think this works too well. It's still a well written article though, so good work.

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DoubleDenial 07 May 2023 17:30

The biology, imagery, and overall tone are shiningly excellent, but I found little in the way of intrigue. Plus, the characters in the exploration log are so peppy that it doesn't even qualify as horror.

It's "realistic", but not exciting. People who enjoy monster articles will get a bigger kick out of it than I did. 3/5