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I would like to think ariii_uwu and ICFD for critting my article.
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For what could've easily passed for an abridged character from "Thomas the Tank Engine", this article spares no hint of disbelief as it proudly refers to supernatural origin upon this piece of equipment. The graphic design, tables, and formatting were pleasing to the eye and believably thrown together by some office employee.
+4!
This is what I like about anomalous cannon tank stories, theyre like podracing pottery.
Haha, nice, cool guy. I think I might be missing some of the story here, since I've never heard of 045-ARC before and I don't know anything about GOI-008, but even if I'm not getting the full lore, the added files on this article still make for a good read. While these are both minor issues, I'd recommend attaching a "see addendum 164-1" on the first mention of an "AHAFV-99", as well as changing the threat rating of it. Either the water-foam it sprays isn't dangerous enough for a red rating, or it does deserve that rating in which case the Authority should/would not have sold any to unknown buyers.
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Why is this thing red if its turret is essentially a giant firehose, and doesn't harbor any ill will towards the foundation or humanity?
Why does the article on AHAFV-99 say that it was manufactured under an Authority contract, but none of the listed buyers are members of the Authority?
And why would Authority Employees terminate RPC-049-ARC instead of attempting to capture it, especially since it's abilities were already neutralized by RPC-164? It would make sense if GOI-008 killed her themselves, but having the authority do it makes no logical sense.
I'm rating this a 2 for now, as the format is appealing to look at, and I like the idea of an in-universe explanation for a deleted entry, but the actual content doesn't seem to pay off.
I really like this. The imagery of a tank praying tickles me just the right way, and the formatting and story are really good. +5
nope changed my mind +2
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This is good stuff, Chrome, but it needs footnotes! You bring up all this lore stuff and then don't even elaborate on what it is. I'm not saying spell it out for us, but at least give those of us who don't follow Nihil lore religiously an idea of what's going on.
who knew nihil suns actually had names that weren't their nicknames
nice
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