Epic review time
Containment:
"RPC-XXXX is to be contained within a standard Humanoid Containment Chamber at Site-038. After multiple minor incidents, the code for said lockbox is to only be known by the relevant Head Researcher at the Site and must be changed after every █ uses." Its eiher a Humanoid Containment Chamber or a lockbox, also you say "said lockbox" as if you already talked about it when u only mention the humanoid containment chamber.
"During experiments, all CSD are to be monitored and are to be refused clothing until RPC-XXXX is secured in the Chamber." are to be monitered and refused clothing*
Description:
If you are making an Amazing! Co. articel it needs a bootleg name and a shitty grammar text on the box to give the Amazing! Co. fell
"RPC-XXXX's anomalous effect manifests" Manifets*
"hereby referred to as the subject" if he is being used as a subject for testing, there is no need to specify its a subject. Maybe you could chabe it to "Host"?
" the area that would contain it ordinarily will instead [REDACTED]" Why is there a need to redact this????
"The body will not generate with clothes and will be nude." The body generated will always be nude*
"It has zero knowledge of Amazing Co., its subsidiaries or its creator however" It has zero knowledge of Amazing Co, its subsidiaries or its creator, however*
"No method is known of improving this nor of recovering prior memories." put the "is knon" at the end
Interview:
"RPC-XXXX is seated in the standard interview room available at Site-██." Is the redacted Site the one of the containment (Site-038) because if so, there is no need to redact.
"[REDACTED] was the subject of RPC-XXXX at the time, watching over video camera in a separate room." You could change subject here for host as well
"I've been made aware. quietly, as an aside Somewhat ironic… normal voice" What the fuck is this, i dont know what u trie dto do here chief
"drily There isn't a pamphlet to using me, sir." here as well with drilly, i kinda understand what you are trying to do but it just looks awful. This trend continues with the whole interview so im not gonna point it out anymore
"XXXX: It is a job, sir. My pay is my existence. As I believe [REDACTED] is wont to say, 'You don't have to enjoy your work - you just have to enjoy what you come to work for'. Oh, and uh… to follow on to that… thank you for rescuing me from those customers. All work and no play leaves… RPC, RPC… what number?
Head Researcher █.: ███." The redacted makes the already confusing interview more hard to follow, also why redact all of the last part??
Overall problems:
You really need to clarify is the anomaly is keep in its human form in a humanoid cell or as an object in a locker. You also say she makes requests to mantain a body, does this mean it can talk in object form??.
The interview was a real mess, i needs to be 100% fixed, even with all of those issues solved its not that good of an article, gets a +3 for me