RPC-059 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-059.

Blairin 22 Feb 2019 15:55

Re-uploaded due to raiders. Again.

H F Dummie 22 Feb 2019 16:17

Pros: It tells some kind of origin for 059, and isn't half bad.
The idea of a dog hypersensitive to loud noises is quite neat.

Cons: Some grammatical and tonal errors.
That's a terribly lot of resources for a dog.
The "woman 21-23" is a bit too obvious of a connection.

Suggestions:
Expand on the daughter. Is she from one of the GoIs or even from the Authority?

google_chrome 22 Feb 2019 17:04

GOOD BOY

TheGreatTarbolin69 22 Feb 2019 18:01

10/10 Good boy.
My main problem is that they made an entire fucking site just for him, that's a lot of wasted resources

DarkGreenEspeon 26 Mar 2019 12:54

I agree with others that building a whole site for a single anomaly is a bit overkill. Surely there's at least one site they can put him where the security officers can just use anomalous weapons if someone tries to attack?

The fact that everyone on site is supposed to just run and hide in case of an attack is weird, too, considering the article doesn't specify how strong or durable the anomaly is, and especially considering you state that it couldn't stop a tank or artillery. According to the article, this means the whole site is fucked if someone decided to attack them with a cannon.

I think the concept for this one is pretty good, but the last bit with the interview is a bit confusing. Clearly the man and dog who died, the man's daughter who doesn't exist, and the fact that the anomaly only likes adult women all tie into one another in some way, but for the life of me I can't figure out how.

There are also a couple of tonal errors in this article, but all in all it's not bad. Well done.

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pogchamp 02 Apr 2019 17:27

Dogge! Just with this a pogtastic article. Liked it,

8ismo 06 Mar 2024 09:32

Makes the Authority out as horribly incompetent. The ending might be the only highlight of the article due to it being an unexpected, interesting twist but everything else just keeps creating questions:
Why not train the dog? Why not permanently deafen it to avoid breaches? Why create an entire site for it? How did it not die yet despite running at random gunshots, either from exposure or wounds?
The entire article is about a biotic dog with no thought put in the logistics and development of the idea. An undeveloped premise that is just based on a cute animal should be reserved for cats and not our best friends.