Example:

…and it is to be guarded by 1 Security personnel

. At least 1 security personnel is to be stationed near the aforementioned glass container at all times.

If RPC-120 needs to be transported, it shall be transported back by one D-class and two security personnel.

One D-Class personnel and two security personnel are to accompany RPC-120 at all times in the event that the transportation of RPC-120 is necessary.

2 now. Remember to use passive voice over active voice whenever possible.

Any testing of RPC-120 is to be conducted by a Researcher with level one clearance or higher.

• I'd recommend changing this to Level +2 clearance as personnel within Level +1 mainly consist of non-employee of The Authority, and are typically granted to personnel working in clerical, logistics, or janitorial positions.

In 75% of cases, affected individuals commit suicide within ██ days of reading RPC-120.

• Why is the days needed to be redacted? How can personnel be aware of their timely deaths prior to their exposure to RPC-120?

Foreword: It has been 3 weeks since D-6750 has come into contact with RPC-120. D-6750 has been given pen and paper to communicate.

• Again, you've redacted the days prior to their exposure as mentioned above, so, why isn't the three weeks part redacted?

Conclusion: The Interview wasn't quite convincing nor appealing, because it was just asking 'asking the D-Class's day' then they draws something, and then the Interviewer concludes the meeting because of the drawing made by the affected subjected.

You've put a lot of effort into this, but the idea could've been a bit more interesting by referring to its background history. All in all, I wouldn't say it was great. -1

The idea could be fleshed out better. Write some more on the object's abilities. Some more interviews, perhaps? Some descriptions of more extreme cases of post-reading paranoia? As for now, it looks like a solid creepypasta material, but a little to bland for my tastes. No vote for now.