Comments for page "RPC-166"

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Wed, 19 Nov 2025 16:33:15 +0000

Bare bones. Cool monster but the article isn't finished by any means. Odd inclusions of hazards that point to nowhere like its sapience and arbitrary conprocs (why titanium against microbes?) that don't utilize its equally arbitrary aversion to water. A more efficient protocol would be to completely fill it with pool water and add cat-light strobes emitting diffused light. Which, come to think of it, would've made for a better picture, knowing in this empty pool there is a flesheating microbe waiting to grow and consume you, than a pitch black containment room.

There is unspecific writing that bring down the immersion like

RPC-166 is still able to overwhelm and consume a staff member under certain circumstances.

This really is unfinished, which I understand given the excitement from RPC just becoming a thing but this really lacks anything to look back on. Still I like the visual of revealing a monstrous blob deteriorating in a flash; Sloshing sounds in the dark to it melt immediately hahaha. Also somewhat funny to think the 99.9% microbe eradicated is applicable here.

I wish it expanded on that or anything at all for that matter. 2 Stars

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Sun, 05 Mar 2023 00:07:58 +0000

Just poorly written and not very original.

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Sun, 29 Aug 2021 16:44:35 +0000

1/5 overall. Reads like the worst series 1 articles.

2/5 premise.
1/5 delivery. Titanium? … woof.
2/5 grammar. Complete sentences does not always guarantee readability.

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Mon, 24 May 2021 07:52:27 +0000

This gives me a huge series 1 SCP vibe. I love it. +5

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Sun, 04 Aug 2019 16:49:52 +0000

Portuguese translation complete x3

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Fri, 31 Aug 2018 16:30:33 +0000

Definitely a well written article. You did a great job with not falling under the clichés when writing about nyctophobia, refreshing article. Upvoted :)

Re: Reupload?

Thu, 02 Aug 2018 23:36:45 +0000

I could but the rating itself doesn't really bother me. If its a good article and people like it that's great. As long as people read it then i'm happy.

Reupload?

Wed, 01 Aug 2018 00:28:30 +0000

You got hit pretty hard by the bots, maybe you should consider asking a mod to delete it and then reuploading? +1 by the way

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Sun, 08 Jul 2018 03:41:31 +0000

Thanks for reading it, is there anything with my writing I could work on or improve though? This is actually my first RPC so I would love to improve myself.

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Fri, 06 Jul 2018 15:07:59 +0000

Well this is an underrated article with an interesting concept. Getting literally eaten by the dark does sound like a good cause for concern. Upvoted.