Do not burn RPC-675’s content

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Under no circumstances is RPC-675's oil content allowed to be ignited.

RPC-675 is an open roof above ground storage tank holding petroleum.

Try:

RPC-675 is an aboveground petroleum storage tank with an open roof.

And yes I checked. Aboveground is a singular adjective.

Exploitation of this supply has been proven dangerous,

dyschronometria

As a general if the reader needs to look up a word, just footnote the definition in.

an individual makes complete skin contact with RPC-675's content.

Complete skin is unclear. It either means the person needs to be entirely submerged or it's superfluous to direct contact. Assuming it's the former, try:

the subject will perceive their future self making a decision.

a decision? Has there been no pattern to associate a nature to these decisions? From what I read you may want to try:

The aberrant illusion has so far not been reconstructed reproduced since (add date here).

Logo of the TerraRoll Affiliation.

The image is self-explanatory.

and found it not green nor gold

Authority in the year 2000 by a letter sent from TerraRoll Engines

This is an incident report, mention down to the day at least.

Soon after receiving this letter, TerraRoll Engines declared bankruptcy. Donald Remy has not been found.

How soon is soon? Minutes? days? No point not specifying when. Same goes for Try:

Terraroll Engines was declared bankrupt 3 hours after receiving this letter. Donald Remy remains missing as of 05/08/2000.

THIS FILE DESCRIBES AN ARTIFICIALLY PRODUCED PSYCHIC. SUCH INDIVIDUALS ARE KNOWN FOR PSYCHOLOGICAL DISABILITY.

"careful he maybe a retard"
Lol nothing wrong with this sentence I just found it funny.

we have concluded that psychics generate qualia differently than the normal average man. The A normal man would bears a relative balance of qualia generation; roughly equal from both cerebral hemispheres.

result in a dispersed, diffused total

Upon further investigation, however,

The Authority however, remained interested. These statistically improbabale events eventually led to Authority interest.

Add a paragraph break here.

containing an unedited video on TerraRoll Engines corporate etiquette.

Larry's entrance in this video would probably not fly in the final cut nor to a multi-national company's standards. Indicate this is preproduction footage. If Larry's role in this footage is simply an act then ignore this edit.

There are additionally various posters spattered around the surfaces. across the walls:

make sure to cover the entire palm, and then leave an imprint it on the provisioned paper.

Donald Remy’s abandoned mansion before the USOC operations.

discussed the future of Saudi imports under the embargo.

Beside the instances, Remy had noted short phrases.

Instances refers to…?

Some of the phrases were had been stricken out.

buttoms bottoms up

lol ill keep that one for later.

I was com- completely overwhelmed by the fleshy mess revelry. Among The yelps and the moans. I barely heard when made out what he spoke again:

replaced by a stare of stale horror terror in his eyes.

What even is a stale horror?

He backed, then ran away.

To:

He backed away and ran.

Thanks for the your time. , and I apologize for the trouble.

Romello is in a found limp on the ground, and being dragged by a man in casual clothing.

OL-Site-675 will be made a Protection Division barracks, to function as further USOC deterrent and military hub.

What else would it be for?

Amidst the early 2021 Authority budget constraints

my truth would was to die just as any other.

just for a drop,. all will donate to me precious qualia.

A funnel from RPC-675 is connected into a gas-turbine engine.

Combined with air-filtering apparatuses, this reduces the amount of psychedelic smoke exhausted into the atmosphere, as well as disguising RPC-675 emissions to the public.

Try:

Combined with air filtering apparatuses, this is designed to minimize hazardous smoke from entering the atmosphere, in addition to masking emissions directly from RPC-645.

Sudden, severe avarice.

Try:

Sudden onset of severe avarice

Treatment of affected subjects is based on this assumption.

Try:

This hypothesis is based on treatment records of afflicted subjects.