RPC-996 tale http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-17734608/rpc-996-tale Posts in the discussion thread "RPC-996 tale" - up up and away! Wed, 22 Jul 2026 04:05:31 +0000 http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-17734608#post-7824274 Re: RPC-996 tale http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-17734608/rpc-996-tale#post-7824274 Thu, 16 Apr 2026 14:33:38 +0000 UnionWatch11 10166892 Like Funhouse said, the first four paragraphs are a necessary evil so hear him. Otherwise, great tale.

]]> http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-17734608#post-7824077 Re: RPC-996 tale http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-17734608/rpc-996-tale#post-7824077 Thu, 16 Apr 2026 13:51:59 +0000 Funhouse 7013424 While the first 4 paragraphs serve as necessary setup, it's not that engaging on its own. The tone of a children's bedtime story makes for good juxtaposition, yet it lacks the colorful language you'd expect in them; Merely simple kids' prose but nothing more.

The tale itself is eerie as you set out to do. It needs some rephrasing and reworking the first half and you're good.

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]]> http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-17734608#post-7820239 RPC-996 tale http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-17734608/rpc-996-tale#post-7820239 Wed, 15 Apr 2026 22:06:50 +0000 thatowldude 5716946 http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/996-tale

My first real attempt at writing something like this, for one of my favorite articles on the site. Wrote this in one sitting while sleep-deprived so it probably sucks mad dick but I'm putting it here anyways cause I had fun writing it

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