There is a noticeable amount of formatting mistakes, the characterization of the Amazing! Suing the Authority feels really strange, the irresponsibility of Rodgers is extremely apparent, and the research group just having a camera recording for no reason makes it hard to get invested in the article. Theodore getting recruited into the ASF is also heavily debatable as a valid decision from the Authority. There is something also with the way that the characters talk that makes it really weird to me - it's not exactly wooden or cliched (besides relying heavily on the Reservoir Dogs reference), but they just don't seem to talk like regular people. I think it might be the speed they change their tone and topic, but who knows.

The article suffers from a lot of problems but the originality is commendable and should be further developed. Keep on writing and improving.

Anomalous was spelled correctly in the forum post I swear. Thank you Mr Makor, 8ismo for your support.