A tale about Amazing! Co., and its only employee http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14208023/a-tale-about-amazing-co-and-its-only-employee Posts in the discussion thread "A tale about Amazing! Co., and its only employee" Fri, 17 Apr 2026 18:34:54 +0000 http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14208023#post-5095884 Re: A tale about Amazing! Co., and its only employee http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14208023/a-tale-about-amazing-co-and-its-only-employee#post-5095884 Wed, 29 Sep 2021 23:42:22 +0000 TheGreatTarbolin69 4318134
Crit
]]> http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14208023#post-5093653 Re: A tale about Amazing! Co., and its only employee http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14208023/a-tale-about-amazing-co-and-its-only-employee#post-5093653 Sun, 26 Sep 2021 18:38:49 +0000 Fortunae 6436891 Critted in discord. Posting this here so that it's marked.
Summary for those who are new to reading so there is no repeat crit:

  • word racist wouldn't be in use then. Use a different word.
  • Make real!Jose's dialogue a little more antiquated to distinguish it more from alt!Jose ( iliked his dialogue)
  • Make a more active intro

Rest was pretty good, I thoroughly enjoyed it. My other suggestions are not worth noting here as they have already been posted.

]]> http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14208023#post-5093291 A tale about Amazing! Co., and its only employee http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14208023/a-tale-about-amazing-co-and-its-only-employee#post-5093291 Sun, 26 Sep 2021 09:49:59 +0000 moist bread 4558857 http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/moistbread74

All comments are greatly appreciated, though lore critique will be discarded

there is no lore to be found here

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