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		<title>Comments for page &quot;The Yarabara&#039;s LitterEaters&quot;</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 03 Jul 2021 17:33:14 +0000</pubDate>
				<wikidot:authorName>Almarduk</wikidot:authorName>				<wikidot:authorUserId>3672751</wikidot:authorUserId>				<content:encoded>
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						 <p>I made some minor code fixes and a grammar correction. Some test log collapsibles were not closed, causing their code to appear in the page. Other comments:</p> <ul> <li>I enjoyed the description of the weird biology of the anteaters. That was some nice clinical tone.</li> <li>The initial tests were interesting, but did not really go anywhere. I felt disappointed that the thaumaturgic conversion wasn't explored more in-depth.</li> <li>The incident and its causes were poorly delivered and conveyed. It took me several reads to construct a mental image of the event, and even then the reason for the 180° change in behavior eludes me.</li> <li>The explanation for organic thaumaturgy didn't feel like an explanation, and the exposition didn't interest me. The idea of a nature-aligned force turning litter into natural products is fun, but the way it was conveyed feels plain. On a technical level, the grammar was poor and took me several reads to parse it.</li> <li>The conclusion was alright, but it felt robbed of its impact by the poor grammar.</li> </ul> <p>Overall, I feel that I would have enjoyed this article much more if it was cut to 3/4ths of its length (in particular the Discovery, some test logs and the final appendix feel too long) and rewritten for better grammar. As it stands, I'm inclined to no-vote or down-vote.</p> 
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