Comments for page "GUN WIZARD: Shotgun Shogun; Two Years Overdue; Gun Wizard's Release Date; King of Anticipation & The Idea Stolen From Dattop"

Unfinished

Fri, 02 Jul 2021 17:56:32 +0000

Echoing the opinion that there are some great ideas here and I'm glad you got it posted, especially considering you just worked on Dreamscape as well, but that doesn't change the fact that I am basically looking at a work in progress. I'm not going to rate it as a result, however I am looking forward to coming back and rating it when you finally complete it.

-1

Thu, 01 Jul 2021 14:10:19 +0000

Very good start and cool idea for the article. However, that's pretty much it. This is a clearly unfinished draft, and I'll have to give it a -1 regardless of what I may think of the concept and explained narrative.

I'll look forwards to see what you can do with this article when you feel better!

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Thu, 01 Jul 2021 04:34:13 +0000

This is obviously not a finished article. In my opinion it should have never been posted — but these are the seeds of something worth reading.

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Thu, 01 Jul 2021 02:35:19 +0000

I'm glad you posted it, despite the extenuating circumstances, but I feel like this would work better if you'd cut down the ending instead of summarizing a much longer ending. Here's to a proper ending when you feel better!

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Wed, 30 Jun 2021 18:00:48 +0000

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