Comments for page "RPC-515"

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Thu, 10 Jul 2025 11:33:34 +0000

Ah, glad to hear that! Yeah, I tend to be a little sketchy with the grammar at times.

To be more precise, about that,

Spoiler

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Wed, 14 May 2025 21:29:25 +0000

I didn't like it at first, but on a further read, I laughed my ass off. You turned To Boldly Flee into an anomaly.

That being said, the story is littered with grammar errors and the clinical tone falters from time to time.

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Tue, 20 Jul 2021 16:09:46 +0000

2/5 overall

4/5 premise. Seems to be based of a real internet personality? Never heard of it if so. Solid enough.
1/5 delivery. Genuinely didn't like that the "research" was recording in some guy's apartment. Also what researcher handles an anomaly with unknown effects themselves? The article is more of a tale than a containment or research document.
3/5 grammar. Well written enough, but the logs are a narrative converted into a script, and are difficult to comprehend unless read multiple times.

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Thu, 08 Apr 2021 22:31:08 +0000

Noted and Added!

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Mon, 05 Apr 2021 21:37:24 +0000

You forgot to appropriately add the Rating component and the « RPC-XXX | RPC-XXX | RPC-XXX » .

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Tue, 16 Mar 2021 20:02:26 +0000

Crit Thread: http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-13859719/anniversary-special

Glad to see I have finally put an article out on the site after leaving it hanging for six months! I feel that there might be a bit more room to expand the concept, but for now I will see how the article does.