I will say, though, the combat is fairly difficult to follow. I think giving more time to combat would be a good idea because it was pretty hard to tell who was stabbing who.

The drawings are good, but the story is what caught me, honestly. I look forward to seeing more types of articles like this, comics, or even other stuff further establishes how our work here is, by all accounts, art.

While it could have been done much better, it's still something: I leave it to the readers and their ratings to decide whether this is good enough to stay on-site, or it's back on the workbench for it.

Big thanks to Qual, Proto, Von, Viz and Almarduk for critting it and giving advice.
A big thank you to Alma as well from dissuading me from altogether dropping this project right at the end.
And last but not least, thank you to Liber and Rura for indulging me in my various brainstormings about the then-called "Powered Rangers" in the old lore server.