Comments for page "Maybe One Day..." http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14028092/maybe-one-day Posts in the discussion thread "Maybe One Day..." Fri, 06 Mar 2026 11:54:02 +0000 http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14028092#post-4932881 (no title) http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14028092/maybe-one-day#post-4932881 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 01:24:51 +0000 televisionist 5258122 Rota said most of what I had to say. I liked it, it reminded me of the Adventures of Sean, just less of that. It's good, but I feel as if it could be improved on in the wording and such. Yet still, I give it a 4/5 based on just being a fun read.

]]> http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14028092#post-4926718 Re: Goliath http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14028092/maybe-one-day#post-4926718 Mon, 15 Mar 2021 17:26:43 +0000 KaiserXI 5293995 Seconded

]]> http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14028092#post-4926091 Goliath http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14028092/maybe-one-day#post-4926091 Mon, 15 Mar 2021 01:54:33 +0000 Fortunae 6436891 I actually quite liked it. There were some ESL-isms here and there and the dialogue was half half in some places but it didn't ruin the reading for me at all and it was probably some of the best prose you've put out on site this far; the plot was interesting as well and I'm always a sucker for man-to-monster plotlines. I would probably give this a 4.4 but fuck it, have a 5 : D

]]> http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14028092#post-4925280 (no title) http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14028092/maybe-one-day#post-4925280 Sun, 14 Mar 2021 02:22:02 +0000 TheGreatTarbolin69 4318134 Crit Thread: http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14027496/david-s-private-hell#post-4924451

Thanks to Alma, Mark, Table, Viz and Qual for their magnificent crit on this tale. I hope that people enjoy this "Slice of Suffering" as much as I enjoyed writing it.

I'll make more stuff about David in the future, equally as depressing.

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