Comments for page "Verdant Remains"

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Sat, 30 May 2020 16:20:21 +0000

The formatting leaves too much to be desired. I highly suggest breaking the paragraphs down as well as adhering to standard formatting for Addendum -A.

-1 for now.

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Thu, 28 May 2020 01:18:00 +0000

On one hand, the clinical tone and execution leave much to be desired. On the other hand, this is an interesting idea that I wish to see expanded on.

Downvote for now. I think you can do much better than this.

(no title)

Tue, 26 May 2020 23:45:01 +0000

Removed sapient hazard and added dates to the discoveries

(no title)

Tue, 26 May 2020 03:20:41 +0000

yeah this doesn't seem too sapient…However if this a possible dream to the anomaly, why not have it attempt to stop the nightmares that appear in its dream to take it away?

Also agree on the need for dates in the discovery.

A small option for the fossils, if they degrade surrounding inorganic things, why not put these things in a greenhouse of sorts? I feel that'd make the most sense, isolate it into a place where it'd do the least amount of damage.

Otherwise, a great tale.

(no title)

Mon, 25 May 2020 15:39:17 +0000

This is interesting, but I'm not seeing how it's a Sapient hazard- and the timeline of discoveries desperately, desperately needs dates.

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Mon, 25 May 2020 01:10:32 +0000

Random hazards were ecological hazard, ideological hazard, and sentient hazard.

Thanks to Kloth2 and TTPY for the crit