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The file you are about to access describes events, procedures or items relevant within Site-101.

The file you are about to access describes events, procedures, or items relevant within Site-101.

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All inmates are designated according to the type of their psychic abilities, and cell location.

All inmates are designated according to the type of their psychic abilities and cell location.

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Colliqually known as the “Song of Grounding” or "Resistance Chanting”

Colliquially known as the “Song of Grounding” or "Resistance Chanting”

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Duchamp Psalm remains as a traditional practice in west European anti-psychic spheres.

Duchamp Psalm remains as a traditional practice in West European anti-psychic spheres.

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RPC-266-LAW’s logical remodelling of Site-101

RPC-266-LAW’s logical remodeling of Site-101

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The Purity might need reminding on its current purpose.

The Purity might need a reminder of its current purpose.

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Believe the Purity to be exceedingly obtuse

Believe the Purity to be exceedingly obtuse.

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Purities are not lobotomized
Purities are still human beings
Purities can feel the entire sensory spectrum, despite not expressing such

Purities are not lobotomized.
Purities are still human beings.
Purities can feel the entire sensory spectrum, despite not expressing such.

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The Paideia is a perfect radio that sends not confessions, but dialects qualia.

The Paideia is a perfect radio that sends not confessions, but dialectical qualia.

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We are comparingly alone.

We are comparatively alone.

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Judiciary units are to record and report drastic changes, as well as drafting proposals for RPC-266.

Judiciary units are to record and report drastic changes and updated draft proposals for RPC-266.

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abandoned its previous form of physical documentation written by Site Directior Jean-Baptiste De Pontes.

abandoned its previous form of physical documentation written by Site Director Jean-Baptiste De Pontes.

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It will hold only the most despicable of psitain, only the aggressors for whom

It will hold only the most despicable of psitains, only the aggressors for whom

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Human Resources have prepared various scripts to explain the victims’ absence.

Human Resources has prepared various scripts to explain the victims’ absence.

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it is predicted that the subject can re develop qualia at a healthy,

it is predicted that the subject can redevelop qualia at a healthy,

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A video tape recorded by Aliénor Moreau depicting

A videotape recorded by Aliénor Moreau depicting

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An audio cassete recorded by Jean-Baptiste De Pontes,

An audio cassette recorded by Jean-Baptiste De Pontes,

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There’s not enough prisons.

There aren’t enough prisons.

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Paideia Pacakages, unlike direct dialectics, are not transmissions of qualia.

Paideia Packages, unlike direct dialectics, are not transmissions of qualia.

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The Warden personally selected PSE-1/012 as premiere subject.

The Warden personally selected PSE-1/012 as premier subject.

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The Inmate is resigned comatose in the north eastern corner. His eyes flutter.

The Inmate is resigned comatose in the northeastern corner. His eyes flutter.

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SOCIAL VULNERABILITY, commonly known as POVERTY or XENOPHOBIA or OPPRESSION or INNEQUALITY

SOCIAL VULNERABILITY, commonly known as POVERTY or XENOPHOBIA or OPPRESSION or INEQUALITY.

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The vision a blur. My qualia, unrefined. Moreau, the lawabider.

The vision a blur. My qualia, unrefined. Moreau, the law-abider.

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I place the lenses over my eyes, transmitting qualia to the main unit; which rattles in response. The prison must bend to deliver me awareness, that is its nature.
The images upon the red mirrors shifts and changes, metamorphosizes, no doubt to show me what I must see.

I place the lenses over my eyes, transmitting qualia to the main unit; which rattles in response. The prison must bend to deliver me awareness; that is its nature.
The images within the red mirrors shift and change, metamorphosing, no doubt, to show me what I must see.

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Maybe it's just me, but I think mirror is a better synonym for looking glass, and Mirror Labyrinth has a nicer ring to it.

You may want to change the disco div background-color property to var(—background-4) to accommodate the white theme, since it is unreadable in it.

Footnote 1 (Limited)

You could say "Examples include a limited capacity to:" or include its inhibition connected with the mechanical world proper.

Personnel assigned to Site-101 must be briefed on the contents and manifestations of RPC-266-LAW provisions, as well as their variance.

Eikon: Enforcement of thought-forms into physical reality

and then then even Sophia and Eikon start giving form to thought.

with novel developments accordingly

as opposed to general developments?

RPC-266-QUILL will can not be mirrored in the reflective surfaces covering the Warden’s Office. It will does not respond to any attempted interaction

making it reminiscent of a civil law system.

Using correct legal terminology and etiquette has been proven to increase the rate of successfully success-rate of amending RPC-266-LAW

Antimemetics

1996 Site-101 underwent a jailbreak by intimate PSE-1/012.

You mean inmate?

Below Attached is footage recorded shortly before PSE-1/012 attempted escape

Since it's contained in sidetabs and not below.

Yes. All the great lawmakers did.

Ouch! Let go of my hand!

You can use a better interjection than ouch here. I personally find it hard to believe.

as knower scholar of his character

breathes superficially

What does that even look like for the video log to pick up?

The group recruits a female Purity and prepares a Paideia class VidiCap for emergency dialectics to on G31.

Secretary Aliénor Moreau enters, asking what caused and asks about the commotion.

Personnel begin accumulating gather within the Monitoring Quarters to perform dialectics with the Purities.

The accumulated guards have begun to emit ocular luminance, and gone quiet

Try:

Gathered guards go silent and begin emitting ocular luminance.

Elongated, and theatrical trials, records describing crime in detail, guards whose sole purpose is to know and confront the prisoner

I have a vision: a failed Directorate Prison; remade into an impenetrable dungeon.

I don't see the point of the semicolon here, as the first sentence is irrelevant to the solution. Remove the semicolon.

Site-101 personnel may access this compilation

You mean this article? If you meant edits, you should say edit history instead. If you meant exhibits, say compilation of exhibits.

We simply can not survive by letting them go.

My assumption, anyway.

I’d like to ask those of you who are close with to the victims' families to be stay present for them.

INCIDENT LOG: PSE-1/012 MISDEMEANOR #7

The transcript begins with [END VISUAL TRANSCRIPT]. Also, shouldn't it be AUDIOVISUAL since the dialogue is auditory?

ASF Officer G159 is taking nourishment delivering a meal to cell 12

tsk tsk you and purple prose are inseparable!

producing an anoetic entity termed the Shaved Purity.

If multiple people can be called the Shaved Purity, then it implies they are a single entity. "You are the Shaved Purity, and also you are the Shaved, too!"

The second phase will synthesize psychism in the prepared participant using the Hemi-Sync technique.

Is this saying a technique known before the discovery of 675 or after? Cause if it's the latter, this 1989 excerpt contradicts their discovery 11 years after, quote:

RPC-675 was brought to the attention of the Authority on June 15th, 2000

Eitherway, I think you want to explicitly date the MK document in 675 to avoid confusion.

It is hypothesized that by using the perception modulating properties of videric substances

Items of personal significance / Items of familiar significance

I'm assuming they also need to be associated with the new memories implanted, no? If so, you wanna put that distinction in the hypothesis or methods section.

Items can be requested from by the participant.

Ludovico treatment

From what I understood from associating pain with internal anguish, it's employing guilt/shame for their disorders? I also advise the mechanism be directly below the type of treatment; it flows better that way.

Warden, what is this?

His eyes are open slightly in to a slit.

Perhaps both work fine…?

Low, nonsensical vocalizations are murmured consistently

An audio recording on VHS cassette created by Jean-Baptiste De Pontes

Never heard of a VHS for sole auditory recording.

I must deconstruct it, touch it, strip it of all allure, reveal it for the banality it is.

I think "touch it" then "deconstruct it" follows the progression of thoughts better.

I remember watching you and your girls playing Perched Cat Chat Perche in the burbonyard bourbon yard.

busying yourself with that little crocheted pocket mirror, and dusting off the mud.

The enclosure measures a symmetrical four cubic meters.

Four cubic meters?? To put this into prespective, the closest approximation of a dimension exponentiated by 3 is 1.6 meters. That's constantly-hunched-over small. Eight cubic meters (2³) is more realistic.

Where? When? What? Who? - expected inquiries. Unconfirmed,

Unanswered?

Who’s Whose genius idea is this?

The Inmate has slept and awoken twelve times.

You have created inadequate statutes.

The boy stumbles in, reeking of smoke and cheap Ppastis and smoke.

Tranquilizing RPC-XXX to expedite the retrieval process is not allowed at any point, but may be utilized should it become violent.

Try:

During retrieval, tranquilization of RPC-XXX may only be granted in the sole case that the subject shows aggression.

For ease of reference, RPC-XXX has expressed a preference for the name "Chanhassen," meaning "Sugar Maple Tree" in the Dakota language.

Containment protocol is purely prescriptive. Since this is descriptive, incorporate it into the description instead.

Pedestrocervus tridactylus

Both the footnote and the Taxonomic title repeat the Binomial name. Instead, add the common name for both. Seeing that this is a made-up species, you can translate the common name from the binomial naming you made up (a good resource to refer to can be found in this document). Also, the binomial name in the description should be italicized.

Stiltwalkers have the capabilities to ambulate on their hind legs, and possess small tridactyl hand-like appendages on their forelimbs., which they can walk on.

Seeing that they walk on those limbs anyway, it's redundant to state it when it is implicit.

characterized by a distinctively human-like facial structure and has the possession of a pair of four-inch stunted antlers that grow and shed naturally similarly to other deer species species of its order.

After teleportation, RPC-XXX will resume its herbivorous diet until once again reverting to its carnivorous tendencies sometime in the future.

You can try connecting the subsequent sentence to this one with a conjunction or (preferably) a footnote.

On 9/27/20██

Redaction here serves no purpose in lore and as a reading experience, by the latter I mean it lessens the immersion cause it raises more questions that aren't as intriguing as they seem.

RPC-XXX had suffered three gunshot wounds to its torso, resulting in severe internal injuries trauma.

Nitpick, but it's hard to believe it didn't stop by the second shot.

Further Addendums Addenda

I don't see the point of adding collapsibles to short entries. They're fine visually, but feel silly when the point of collapsibles is condensing the segments into digestible chunks. Seeing that they already are, it makes less sense to format it this way.

We didn’t notice it at first and thought she was being picky about her food

like a starving dog in an alleyway only to seem disappointed at something.

You probably want to reword this as it's colorful imagery, but without the needed clarity.

like she was suffering withdrawals from some hard drug a chronic drug addict going coldturkey

Obviously, she was malnourished but it shouldn’t have been this bad at this point. When I got to her all she could do was say “meat” just over and over again. We got her some and she almost perked right back up. It kept asking for it every day until the first XXX-A event happened. It just vanished, a slight smell of a pond was left behind but that’s it.

This addendum serves little beyond recounting what we already learned in the description. Instead, you can use this as an opportunity to add a more colorful retelling of the event. For example, you can try:

She was obviously malnourished at this point, but it shouldn’t have gotten this bad. Stranger still is she wound up only sort of braying out "rabbit", "squirrel", or simply "meat" when we approached her. Neumann suggested we give it excess 286 flesh for logistics' sake, to which she perked right up and consumed it with the enthusiasm of a starved wild boar. It was a matter of seconds before half the trough was emptied that she vanished the moment we looked the other way. I remember as we called retrieval that a subtle scent of pond water lingered momentarily.

RPC-XXX maintains that the XXX-A events are not intentional acts outside its volition, claiming to have little to no memory of wanting to eat meat. Often after this event, it is often found patiently awaiting retrieval.

RPC-XXX may has exhibited signs of confusion and erratic behavior that which requires verbal de-escalation to alleviate. whenever feasible

"Require" is dialectic in nature, so it defeats its use when you say "whenever feasible".

To date, the event of RPC-XXX's escape has only occurred in the absence of direct human observation, however it has been captured by surveillance cameras.

"Escape" implies this was intentional. I also needed to re-read this sentence multiple times to infer what you meant to say here, so it needs rephrasing. Direct human observation already means surveillance is rendered indirect; In fact, this could be incorporated into the containment protocols to detect XXX-A events. Try:

As of writing, RPC-XXX-A events have only occurred in the absence of direct human observation.

The prevailing hypothesis posits that RPC-XXX possesses the ability to displace itself within the surrounding forest by replacing itself with an equal volume of space at the point of egress.

This clause is largely disconnected from its prior. You should use the sentence after as a bridge between this sentence and the one before it (X happened likely as a consequence of Y)

Ongoing efforts are being undertaken to investigate this theory further.

You switched from a hypothesis to a theory, which is a step above it and what researchers are striving to achieve to begin with. Try:

Investigation is ongoing to substantiate this hypothesis.

To this end, wireless solar-powered cameras are being employed to track and log the next point of manifestation.

I fail to understand how this better helps researchers further their understanding.

8/12/20██__

Missing __. Same two entries down.

now recorded at eight months, and twelve days.

Maela, please don’t enroll XXX in more courses. Order from the Overseer. -Reids

It's unusual for the chain of command to be expressed in this manner. Instead, it should be directly from the position giving orders. Also, we do not have the position of an overseer in RPC, and the equivalent of it (Global Director) is excessive for this decision. Try:

"Refrain from enrolling RPC-XXX in any higher levels of education."
- Site Director (choose a name here)

47th XXX-A event, the second within only 48 hours

This behavior's been going on for several months, but it's only gotten worse. It's like seeing those poor animals in zoos whose cognitive needs aren't being met. She It has a good mind. I'll see if the Overseer will reconsider their decision on revoking the education program from RPC-XXX. I'll also be placing a request for a more natural containment unit.

This reads too sympathetically on an official document, in which case you'll need to convey it subtly. It also makes no sense to have a researcher read this out like a diary for personnel who are provided this document for informational purposes. Try:

"It is important to note RPC-XXX's mental state has significantly deteriorated over the past four months, and this behavior in particular has progressively worsened; It is suspected that this is the cause of recent cognitive regression. Additionally, [it] has grown reclusive to personnel previously amicable in [its] eyes. Based on this development, I request that the education program for RPC-XXX be reinstated as a containment protocol."
- Lead Researcher Reids.