RPC-683-A-31: Again..!? Did you tell Naka- erm… Moonstar to not bite him too hard on the stomach? Did you…?

its WARRIOR CATS???

Very proud of everyone who put their time and effort into this to make it such an incredible piece.

The moon rises over Europe and sets in Japan, and the terrible wolves follow in its wake! Thanks to everyone who gave crit to this piece, and to Jamiroquai777 for his rumor and the inspiration to this article. I hope you all enjoyed it!

(Awesome article 5/5)

Holy Knights of Love, Truth, and Justice

This huge article was a collaborative effort. So credits to the following:

MF_TOMB - Character groundwork & interview drafts
RPC_INTERLOPER - Advice, research, & translation proofreading
Ani - Translation proofreading, character design & artwork
Adejny - Claudetta dancing gif

Crit:

Funhouse
JustAlways
TTPY
Adejny
(Forum Thread)

I LOVE BIG PUFFY PANT!!!!

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WHY!

Good RPC 5/5 Star

As for the story, I wouldn't be opposed to someone writing a tale centered around Harley if thats a story you wanna tell! Personally, I'm fine leaving it with the question of it because it makes you think about and personalize it.

Rather than think about "well whats gonna happen to Harley's relationships now" think about what would happen to YOURS if YOU were put into that situation. A situation of things being done to you where you had no control of your actions, and retain no memory of performing those actions.

Harley's story isn't just of workplace abuse, and I hope my slight explanation above points that out. Victims of that exact situation don't often get their stories explored, or are told they're made up, etc etc etc. In my opinion, not all angles need to be fleshed out for an intriguing story to be told, because if someone understands the nuances at hand then perhaps the story's already been told.

(If you genuinelu still don't understand though, I can tell you. Just @ me in the discord. This goes for anyone)

Translated from Latin American Spanish, Mr. Rojas' preferred language.

Which one? There's like, a lot of latin american countries.

Aside from that, this is a pretty straight forward article and its well written. Im unsure about giving it 5 stars because the story didnt resonate with me particularly. I felt that it didn't expand on what happened to Mr Harley other than "they got threatment". Like, they probably got traumatized for life and ridiculed by their closest family members, but the article doesn't expand or dwelve into that. You could make the case that this is a pristine example to explore abuse in a work environment: what some might call a harmless prank could have devastating life consequences for others.

I like the article, but it could use one extra paragraph about the consequences of Guillermo's actions. 4 stars.

+5

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My submission for the Terrible Trio event (Using this rumor as the initial inspiration)! Hope you enjoy it, as it's definitely a step away from my usual type of article.

Thanks to those who gave crit! Lemme know if there's anything I missed!